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Last week, Nick found out courtesy of the late news Rhys had been murdered. Now, he’s sitting in his apartment, alone with his thoughts.
A familiar feeling twisted Nick’s chest, suffocating him. Just like the night he shot Rhys, it took his breath, then lingered, toxic and dark. But it didn’t choke him out.
Something wasn’t right.
He toyed with his phone, dialing the same seven numbers over and over, hitting delete instead of send. Would the man he knew only as Cutter be willing to talk?
*warning: this WIP has not yet met the brutal hand of my editor.*
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poor Nick, love ur six sentence sunday! I’d love for you to check out mines and leave a comment. thnx.
http://www.soniawrites.com/2012/08/six-sentence-sunday-wedding-bells.html
Thank you!
Oh, I want to know more of what he’s thinking. A fabulous and intriguing six! 🙂
Thanks so much, Jessica!
I really like the first few lines, you can feel his anguish. Nice six!
So glad to hear that, Elyzabeth. Thank you!
Great six. I can totally see him dialing and hanging up. 🙂
Thank you, Krystal!
I’m really attached to Nick and Rhys at this point. He seems so heartsick! Can’t wait to read more of this!
Thank you so much!
The intensity is definitely ramping up. Can’t wait for more!
Almost there! LOL. Thank you, Karen!
Sounds a tortured soul. Find Kristal Here
That he is, lol.
Love the imagery of the feeling “toxic and dark” that hits him. Poor Nick. Hope Cutter’s willing to help. Great six!
Thank you, Jenna!
I really like the bit about him dialing the number over and over, but hitting delete instead of send. It gives us insight into his uncertain state of mind. Good six!
Thanks so much, Linda!
You’ve done a great job showcasing an obviously tortured character in this six. I’m very curious about what happens next.
Thanks, Jess. I’m so glad to know that!
Make the call! I’m waiting patiently for this one, really 😉 I can see this 6 in my head, the poor abused phone, lol
LOL. Thank you so much, S.J.!
I love the description of his emotional state. I hope he finally presses “send” so he can have some answers.
Thanks, Carrie-Anne!
Oh, this sounds so mysterious. Love how you present his conflict here. Great six, Sarah.
Thank you, Kate!
Yes. Yes. Cutter has to talk!
LOL! Thanks for visiting, Kate!
Intriguing six! Definitely want to know more about what happened and who this Cutter is…
Thanks, Angela!
Yep, I’m with the others – and Nick – I want to know the how and why of it. 🙂
Yay! Thank you, Elin!
Love the emotion and uncertainty in this snippet….you did a great job with your six this week Sarah 🙂
Thank you, Christine!
Nice emotion. I hope those mean old editors like it too.
Me, too, Elaine. Thank you! ;c)
Fabulous six Sarah! I can feel what he’s feeling and I’m eager to see if Cutter will talk to him. I also love the cover of the book and would like to know how you designed it.
Thank you, Frank! As for the cover, it was designed and created by the incredibly talented Elaina Lee. She’s created a lot of my covers – I LOVE her! You can see more of her work or contact her here: http://www.forthemusedesign.com/
Beautiful job of portraying emotion. But if all he knows of this Cutter is his name and phone number, why should he trust him to know more about Rhys that the news did?
Thank you for the lovely compliment! As for your question, before Nick cut ties with his old job, Cutter was his contact. They didn’t exchange personal information – just the job, and just to stay alive.
Oh, Cutter. Friend or enemy? Sounds dangerous.
A good question, indeed! LOL. Thank you, Dianne!
Love it!
Thanks, Hildie!